Comments - Romeo and Juliet

Nice moments:
When the "you" in the opening transitions to "one" then "I."
"Less of a good play, though in some ways a nicer place to live. Better weather. Unfortunately, we’re running out of time." Better weather is fun. Running out of time is ominous.
Mount Responsibility.
Transcending irrationality as "majestic." A word choice that transcends its own irrationality.
Oh no, divorce. :-( Oh no! A spondee. :-)
Bruise = sickly sweet.
And all the closely-examined feelings and literary analysis and stuff.
Thanks for sharing.
xDL
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Almeda Bohannan
Update: 2024-12-04