Writing advice from Matt Stone and Trey Parker
The creators of South Park:
“If the words ‘and then’ belong between those beats … you’ve got something pretty boring. What should happen, between every beat that you’ve written down, is either the word ‘therefore’ or ‘but’ … that gives you your causation.”
Why it matters:
‘And’ implies a simple continuation.
‘But’ implies conflict.
‘Therefore’ implies progress.
Here’s the vid:
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Christie Applegate
Update: 2024-12-02